Open Poetry #41 |
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bashful bay |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast ![]() |
it used the be your mountains that my eyes would climb on morning tide from the drifting of my dragon I would use my hands to devour their volume begging for more with a hunger more than a day's worth eye full perhaps a panting ravenousity and then my bow was nudged subtle by the seam of your sea and sand the bashful bay ceremony of your willingness to bear my wood and the blessed journey's ending where my rudder could press in furrow of a lover's virgin embracing and calm waters would steal my soul ___________ logograph by daark |
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BBGrrl Member
since 2007-07-17
Posts 181BC, Canada |
*smile* Tricksy, you are... enjoyed. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
so very soothing to read this...nice and warm ![]() |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Every thing that you write, is something that I love. And that last line is pure soulful reflection perfection. ![]() |
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Moonkist Member
since 2006-09-29
Posts 197Pennsylvania |
Try if you might And you will find The gentle lapping Of our soul's mind... I agree with SEA - very soothing... also hypnotic... nice one "Ah! my Be-loved, fill the cup that clears |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thank you ladies for the touch |
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WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
This is a good one!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thank you WW |
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Janette![]()
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
Your logogram is "more than a day's worth eye full," and successfully represents a "bashful bay." I enjoyed this journey, it is a lovely read. always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
janette, thanks to you sexy lady for the touch, so nice to see you back |
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MGROVES![]() ![]()
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
always a pleasure, I've missed you~ My spirit will rise |
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bel1e Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631 |
what a lovely awakening... yes, yes~ ~beLLe |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms G, thanks __________ ms bel1e, you bless me thanks |
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