Open Poetry #41 |
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An Untitled Moment Of Tender Recall |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
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![]() Still, your eyes speak of love held tenderly, glowing down upon the hearts of three. I now write of you both, of this, and how I would know the beauty of your face no not here, not now, but in another time and place and I would remember your voice, the sound, and oh yes, surely that grin when time has come and gone we would begin again but until then I shall hold you both so tenderly in my heart and soul within every part of me I can see you there holding hands in wait Mom, I'll finally meet you there and Dad, I'll see you again at heaven's gate. {Karilea, my sisters and I can not thank you enough, for this precious gifting.... ![]() |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Donna, I see how much you look like your Mom~~ Beautiful words. ![]() M |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
M~ thank you. Until Karilea did this picture for me, (combined the two pictures into one) I had never seen a pic of them together before. I shared the photo with my sisters. We are all so very touched to have this. |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Beautiful, and yes you look so much like your mom. And thank you Karilea for giving this precious gift to our gentle spirit. latearrival |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I enjoyed reading of this love and beliefs...thanks for sharing...James |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I know this feeling. Over the past year or so, we have come across a moderate stash of family pictures that go back about 50 to 60 years in time. Such memories... you are blessed. |
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Greeneyes![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
hugging you..... ![]() precious! ~~**~~ |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Beautiful! You are, they are, as is your prayerful write. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
a very special gift; a wonderful 'write'! serious, sustained applause!! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Donna...When I started reading this, I heard Karilea in the back ground clapping and you taking a bow, and then you switched places. Such a dear memory does that. ![]() |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Gentle Spirit, this is wonderful and I feel very happy for you and your sisters, it is great having good friends, they lessen the burdens of life and make special moments smile. Looked like a lovely couple and your mum has a wonderful smile. Rick |
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poeticdestiny Junior Member
since 2007-07-29
Posts 19Georgia |
Beautiful write. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thank you each for sharing a moment with me, and them. HUGS and thank you's.... |
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