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Open Poetry #41

Trying To Find

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2007-11-14 06:59 PM

Staying here,
Out of reach,
Looking and trying
to understad,
Why you left me?
And gone away,
Looking for another day
to shine,
And chasing the clouds
Of yesterday's gone,
Trying to find,
Trying to control myself,
Don't know why?
Life is only here
for short time,
Trying to believe,
Every single word you said,
Before you left me,
Trying to understand,
Ech everything
of my broken hear,
Trying to reach to our love,
Trying to say the things,
Should have done and said earlier,
But now,
It's too late,
You are out of reach
Trying to understand,
Trying to your love....

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

1 posted 2007-11-14 07:05 PM

Vandana-

Very powerful words I see in this poem, could you tell me more about, what this means !

ARCTIC WIND

aziza
Member Elite

since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

2 posted 2007-11-14 07:43 PM

It's as if you have opened a window to your heart.

hugs,
A

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2007-11-15 02:31 PM

Sad when it doesn't work out...James

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2007-11-15 05:07 PM

Looking for another day
to shine,
And chasing the clouds
Of yesterday's gone,
Trying to find,

May your reaching be successful, dear Vandana.

Loved the outpour of your heart.

Love,
Margherita

Gumpy
Member

since 2007-11-06

Posts 143
Canada

5 posted 2007-11-15 05:36 PM

I really feel emotion in this poem.
Well written.

Gumpy

Heartbroken

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