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Rapture |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Rapture Swallowing my tranquility My eyes succumb to the dead of night Its thick dark curtains fall Five distinctive dialects accent the frothy mist Molecular attraction Each unveiled nomenclature can’t resist Intensive chemical reaction Reasons are as random as horizons to the East How the sun may rise or set within what’s treasured Most and least Soulful affirmation prone to selfless adoration My love for you seeks undiminished adulation Though I have tried such ill attempts to quell All still building in my chest, a cap upon the wishing well And yet, when given audience just once choked back inside The very feelings held at bay, not dead, instead intensified Unstoppable distraction Blessed by faithful teachings Far beyond my humble words in spirit reaching Trembled on, trembled on Will you see the depths of all you mean to me? Feel the strength let gather in the night, I wait Setting free demands that may be hidden from my sight As while you soar and flex your glossy wings My inner life remands the comfort of these things Now molten interaction Given service each reaction Listen deeper to the darkness ‘fore the light In your arms, my being will release to my delight All the words that resonate in nature’s hands to be In all the ways that put eternal touch upon your love in me Copyright Kkh 11/12/07 |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
As deep and complex as it is simply beautiful! XO Robert |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Rapturous words from a captivating poetess. "Far beyond my humble words in spirit reaching Trembled on, trembled on Will you see the depths of all you mean to me?" ~ Most assuredly, he will ~ and he is very fortunate man.  May you be loved as deeply as you love. Linda  |
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fromme2U Member
since 2007-11-09
Posts 257 |
you are a good poet |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed one of your poems again ARCTIC WIND |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Goood? Most certainly is.... How is the weather? |
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