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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2007-11-12 09:21 AM

Rapture

Swallowing my tranquility
My eyes succumb to the dead of night
Its thick dark curtains fall

Five distinctive dialects accent the frothy mist
Molecular attraction
Each unveiled nomenclature can’t resist
Intensive chemical reaction
Reasons are as random as horizons to the East
How the sun may rise or set within what’s treasured
Most and least

Soulful affirmation prone to selfless adoration
My love for you seeks undiminished adulation

Though I have tried such ill attempts to quell
All still building in my chest, a cap upon the wishing well
And yet, when given audience just once choked back inside
The very feelings held at bay, not dead, instead intensified
Unstoppable distraction
Blessed by faithful teachings
Far beyond my humble words in spirit reaching
Trembled on, trembled on

Will you see the depths of all you mean to me?
Feel the strength let gather in the night, I wait
Setting free demands that may be hidden from my sight
As while you soar and flex your glossy wings
My inner life remands the comfort of these things
Now molten interaction
Given service each reaction

Listen deeper to the darkness ‘fore the light
In your arms, my being will release to my delight
All the words that resonate in nature’s hands to be
In all the ways that put eternal touch upon your love in me

Copyright Kkh 11/12/07

Robert Frazier
Senior Member

since 2003-02-06

Posts 1014

1 posted 2007-11-12 09:38 AM

As deep and complex as it is simply beautiful!

XO
Robert

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2007-11-12 09:45 AM

Rapturous words from a captivating poetess.

"Far beyond my humble words in spirit reaching
Trembled on, trembled on

Will you see the depths of all you mean to me?"

~ Most assuredly, he will ~ and he is very fortunate man.

May you be loved as deeply as you love.

Linda

fromme2U
Member

since 2007-11-09

Posts 257

3 posted 2007-11-12 07:17 PM

you are a good poet

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

4 posted 2007-11-12 07:23 PM

Enjoyed one of your poems again

ARCTIC WIND

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

5 posted 2007-11-15 06:00 PM

Goood? Most certainly is.... How is the
weather?

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