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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
They took my poem and posted it On another site, They took the credit for my crap, And that just isn't right!! You know they must have writer's block If they'd use a work of mine Most my stuff is really bad, Usually don't rhyme I wonder why they didn't use One of my great works 'Bout Balladeer my dear dear friend With all his little 'quirks" Some steal your money-credit cards Your entire identity, Guys will try to steal your heart To steal virginity. "Time" steals your youth and memory The luster from your hair You lose the gold as you grow old What's left leaves04 silver there. So take my poems and post on walls It's just a name and nothing more, Use it well cuz what the hell That's what walls are for! (Note: stole the last line from from an old folk song). |
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Bronzeage Member
since 2007-07-20
Posts 197 |
Plagerism is the sincerest form of larceny |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
You started off cute and funny like I'm used to Toe ... but I sure love it when you weave in the wisdom and truths throughout your fun pieces.  Loved this part especially: quote: I agree wholeheartedly with your thoughts here as well. They can take your words, but that's about it. Your character and personality are yours and yours alone ... and we love ya for that!  Best wishes and hugs, /Kit |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You have rendered your sentiments well with just the right dose of wit and wisdom. Love, Margherita |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
good, good, good. and truth. enjoyed the writing Tomtoo |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
I can understand someone taking yours, because yours is so much better. But, they must be real desperate to take one of mine. And, that is just what they did. They sure had alot of nerve. |
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sweetbomb Junior Member
since 2007-08-07
Posts 48Canada |
It's like kidnapping your kid, I'm so sorry. D |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 at your humor!But I was about ready to wring someone's bloody neck over those thefts!!!! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
An old folk song eh.....LOL! I'm not so sure......This is great fun.... Eric |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Why anyone would steal your stuff Is a mystery to me. If they get caught you know the plead Will be insanity! How could any human mind commit Such a silly stupid blunder? Aha! I hear he's just been caught.. The thief is Stevie Wonder!!!  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
M'friend, I surely and will here admit that to claim a poem of yours? 'Tis wit! For yours is none other than fine... but then they'd admit, to toes, and rags, and kind....   Love ya! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
"Time" steals your youth and memory The luster from your hair Isn't that the God's truth, though? LOL But even time doesn't steal your talent, dear one... how dare anyone else try to!!!! A great humorous look at a situation that had me wanting to kick bricks! *S* |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hi, Toe! I'm glad that suthern bumped this back into the light of day! I had missed it the first time around! Love your self-effacing wit and charm! Giving you a warm hug of love from north of the 49th! Linda |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
Now this is what is meant by 'Lemons to lemonade.' I really enjoyed it and Balladeer's reply, too. Rae |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Thank you for the smile, again! It is a sad thing when people can't think for themselves and resort to taking someone else's thoughts. Your attitude is great though... As for losing the gold when one gets old, it's too expensive to get gold even in your teeth to keep these days. The gold in my hair is all fallin' out..the silver, too!   |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Isn't that where you got Balladeer's phone number? Off the wall, I mean... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
enjoyed~~ M |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Yea...that's where I got Bally's phone number...It was written right under the prophylactic machine.....under that somebody wrote: "This is the worst chewing gum I've ever tasted!!!" |
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