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It's me! |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa 
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It’s me you’re looking for when searching for that dream maddeningly disjointed on recall’s periphery. It’s me you’re looking for when moonbeams strike the memory of midnight’s haunting hour and lift the chant of love twelve sad and lonely times. It’s me you’re looking for when morning breaks the spirit and quells the flash of insight into the wonderful. It’s me you’re looking for when passion speeds desire from the mind to body parts in the solitude of need. It’s me! Helen / 1 September 2007 |
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Bronzeage Member
since 2007-07-20
Posts 197 |
Sweet piece. I enjoyed reading this. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Helen, very lovely write. Nicely done sweetie. |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
I really enjoyed your concept here Helen. I love the thought of someone not knowing "who" they are dreaming or thinking of, and how you portrayed this. Nicely penned!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Insightful and poignant and yes also brilliant! You speak out this truth that needs to be heard. Love, Margherita |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Thanks everyone. It seems to me that a truth that should be heard never is - just the way of the world I suppose but to not know who we're dreaming of is perhaps akin to a crime. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Love your sweet, spunky spirit, Honey!  Get the word out! To know you, is to love you! Love to you! Linda  |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Yep, Linda - you got that one right! Well, that's what I keep telling myself at any rate but who really bothers to "know" these days? Hugs to you dear lady! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Helen~ I adore the thought of 'recall’s periphery'~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Thank you so much for the read, Marge, and for commenting. Much appreciated. Helen |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"It’s me you’re looking for when searching for that dream maddeningly disjointed on recall’s periphery." Very nicely done Honeybunch. JL  Blessed are those who are generous, because they feed the poor. |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Thank you, JL! |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi Helen...it's me. I've missed you! |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. My time and money bets not. . |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Helen....it's high time he figured it out! Why is it it takes some of them so very long....and then even when they do....well, some of them are just s l o w ! Enjoyed your spirit in this one. .....jo |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Hi Martie - I've missed you too! Huan Yi - Yep, you've got a good chance of winning your bet because all things are possible. Jo - Hi, my friend! It's okay, you know. There are lifetimes yet. Thanks everyone! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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