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Need a name for this poem |
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poetryisapassion New Member
since 2007-08-23
Posts 8Arizona, USA |
How this day can be so sweet I may have a little treat And day by day I live through Only one day I may become two And when this day so blessed my soul Will birds sing without a toll And then the wreched heart must break For thou I cannot forsake And when ye hear the whistle blow You will know that my life must be dull And now ye hear these words I've said Remember them and take them to thy bed And hear the chorus sing below Of such a great man we know And if you hear ye name not Then thou hast been forgot And pass them by and by And hear the sounds of a neverending lie! [This message has been edited by poetryisapassion (08-23-2007 08:02 PM).] |
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sweetbomb Junior Member
since 2007-08-07
Posts 48Canada |
Life is a lie so might as well see the cup runningth over and have some fun with it as much as you can. How about Life Is A Neverending Lie as a title? Don't lie to yourself though. D |
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poetryisapassion New Member
since 2007-08-23
Posts 8Arizona, USA |
hmmm... I don't know... I didn't write about the lies.. Its about a great man who has a wonderful life and does so many things but no one ever reconizes what he did for the world... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The One Alone might work as a title. Sometimes it is very difficult to give a title to a work... Welcome to Passions! Please, check your email for a very special greeting! " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love |
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Tears-of-Sanity Member
since 2007-09-05
Posts 121Kingdom Hearts |
This poem is nice... as a title I suggest: Song Unknown! Tears of Sanity |
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