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Ache Of Love (With Voice/listen MP3) by request
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Ache Of Love (With Voice/listen MP3) by request |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart 
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MP3 Ache Of Love click above to listen  Ache Of Love Empty is the ache that pains deep within my chest, Voice I long to hear, such sweet intoxication soothing my ear, Makes me happy and blessed, Hungry for your laughter, I sit, starving, wanting to eat of your mind, Eat you up like a wolf, stomache growling, it's dinnertime, Let me feast upon you, every part of you, I must devour, For then, I become, a love thirsty, vampire, Oh, the longing,the desire, It burns within me, a flame, your love ignites my fire, Mourning like a dove, cooing lonely sorrow, I am lost without your love, Hope comes new, with each tomorrow, Nothingness, silence, a void, dark existance, an empty space, where you should be, beside me, Holding my hand, kissing my fingers, my neck, ever so gently, your eyes on mine, two lives combine, My arms inside yours, sweet love warming us, all over from head to toe, You know, you are the other half, to my soul, I cannot breathe one breath, without you any longer, Oh, this ache grows stronger.... Come my love, come to me, breathe love into my soul, So that I might live, being completly loved, becoming whole, let not my heart die, from being apart, For then do I, have only, half a heart, Blind I walk alone, for you are my eyes, I miss you darling, so deeply I miss you, Let the heavens of blue, hear my lonely crys, for death would be but a blessing in disquise, Than to live without, your love in my life, Soothe my ache, come lay your love balm, upon my wounds, Pour it thick, lay it all over, heal, soothe this ache, Please my love , Please, before my heart does break, Bare your mind and soul, deep into me, brand me with your love, so I , like dove, will be set free, Oh this ache of Love, this ache of love, Is killing me...... We attract hearts by the qualities we display, we retain them by the qualities we possess.~Jean Baptiste Antoine Suard |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, the beauty of your words, the music and your sweet plaintiff voice, were exceptionally moving. In fact, I want to go back and experience it all over again! Well done!  EA |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
WOW! Thanks Linda, I needed the encouragement as of late. It would be nice to hear other poets reciteing their poems as well on here! I would love to hear you especially with that Canadian voice! Love and Hugs ARH |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I know the feelings of having half a heart...feeling like a part of my heart is missing...you have presented this wonderfully... When I am apart, I try to focus on the value of love, the lessons of love that can be learned, the joy and grace of love that abounds inside a heart, even though physically alone love has no boundaries...James |
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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
ARH - 'twas good to hear this....again. CG |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
Milly... well done in print and performance. Thank you for sharing in such a wonderful way. MoonShadow . |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
ARH -- Now this was ROMANTIC!!! Loved the background music (one of my favorite pieces of music btw). The sript is lovely, too -- wish I knew all that html stuff. *hugs*...jo |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Lovely presentation, both written and spoken. Well done sweetie. |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
ARH, Well that was so sweet. I remember that voice so clearly, It was a pleasure to have you again, I mean hear you.  Love that accent, it makes that enticing side of the poem so much more more... well warm. More Please. Parker |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
this is lovely gosh i wish i could do this too my brooklyn accent would be quite a different color from yours though |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Oh, yeah we've got to hear that brooklyn accent in a poem.  |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Beautiful read. JL Blessed are those who are generous, because they feed the poor. ~Proverbs 22:9 NLT |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Oh, Wow! Beautiful, sad, loving, sensuous, and just everything rolled into one. A pleasure to hear you and that ache, yes, many know it well but here you write and speak it best. |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Beautiful, ARH! What a treasure to hear the words spoken as they were intended to be read. It's so great to "hear" your voice accompany your piece ... really well done, much enjoyed!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice write |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
ARH I set up my speakers just so I could hear this. You caught my eye as the first to combine voice and music (I may have missed others .. not sure) -- and I wanted to hear yours first. I listned twice in a row. This is beautiful. I have enjoyed your poetry, but to hear you read it .. well, it is an amazingly beautiful experience. Back to the top of the first page you go. You deserve to be there a long time. Well written. Well read. Well done! Thank you, Alison |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Thank you..all of you, I am greatly humbled by your words, especially Allison who set up speakers to hear little ole me? My goal is to tocuh the reader in a way, that makes them feel something they have never felt before, reaching deep inside and making them feel and see the world different. To feel my love, my passion, as if it is coming right off the page. If I have succeeded in that, I am rewarded from your replies! Glad you listened, I will try to do another one...I am working with James at the moment for his poem...hopefully it will sound as beautiful as his poetry! WARM HUGS~and.....  You know you're in love, when you can't fall asleep,because reality is finally better than your dream~Dr.Seuss |
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Chosen one Junior Member
since 2007-09-13
Posts 29 |
BEAUTIFUL POETRY A ROMANTIC HEART! it was nice to here your voice |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
ARH, That was a first for me and I confess to enjoying your presentation. Thanks for going the extra mile. Well done. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, |
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Chosen one Junior Member
since 2007-09-13
Posts 29 |
ARH, this poem is very well done, and i think this is your best one so far. i know i have already replied, but go up to the top, you deserve it Smiles |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Chosen one...you are like magic, appearing out of the blue...a true angel...thank you ! ~ARH  You know you're in love, when you can't fall asleep,because reality is finally better than your dream~Dr.Seuss |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Larry..going the extra mile..well..that is what I am all about! LOL! Hugs~ARH You know you're in love, when you can't fall asleep,because reality is finally better than your dream~Dr.Seuss |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Pray for encouragement..and God sends his angels to the rescue! Chosen...I hope to see that website of yours, and some of your work as well! You have me anticipating the first post from you! (i take a bow to your compliments) Heartfelt thanks! HUGS~ARH You know you're in love, when you can't fall asleep,because reality is finally better than your dream~Dr.Seuss |
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Chosen one Junior Member
since 2007-09-13
Posts 29 |
ARH! Again i wish to raise you higher than others, this poem is a blessing , and i wish that you post more with your voice! with hugs and smiles Chosen One |
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paradise islands New Member
since 2007-09-15
Posts 9 |
a romantic heart- this poem was so sweet and talk about sexy! i love this poem, how gentile your voice is. please do add more poems with your voice sincerely paradise islands |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
This, dear, reached out and embraced my heart, the theme song was of course, from one of my favorite movies...and your voice reading just makes it that more special...I love this, so much, listening to your voices...how does it work? Well, however, it was absolutely beautiful...thank you |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Very lovely, touching and tender. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Arh, this poem is very sexy i love your voice, please write more with you voice |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Revisiting this wonderful poem! One of my favorites of yours. ARCTIC WIND |
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