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All My Love Has Been Blind
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All My Love Has Been Blind |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
All My Love Has Been Blind By: Noah Eaton 2/2/06 More than ever I feel I know you, each time I follow through, each time you escape my field of view. You always left me with a passing glance, in your interpretive dance, and I pay my wishes, like some annuity in advance. ...hearing you breathing, breathing in the background... Finding my way to where you are, often leaving everything else behind, all time out of mind, seeing you clearly from so afar, but all my love has been blind, all your love has been blind... Peeking straight up from my balustrade, staring into deep space, tracing your special star with bobbin lace. I tear up, lovestruck, relieved that nothing has changed, cause your star glistens all the same, where I vacation every evening, to your sweet, rejuvenating embrace... ...hearing you breathing, breathing in the background... Finding my way to where you are, often leaving everything else behind, all time out of mind, seeing you clearly from so afar, but all my love has been blind, all your love has been blind... And after all this time, I’ve loved you more every day, staring through the window blind, I hope your heart doesn't feel betrayed, everytime you wake... Finding my way to where you are... . . ...often leaving everything else behind, all time out of mind, seeing you clearly from so afar... . . ...but all my love has been blind, all your love has been blind... And after all this time, I’ve loved you more every day, staring through the window blind, I hope your heart doesn't feel betrayed. And after all this time, I’ve loved you more every day, staring through the window blind, I hope your heart doesn't feel betrayed... ...everytime you wake... "If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other" Mother Teresa |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
What a treat! I got to read two of your poems today! I found the following lines so wistful, and yet ever so beautiful. "Peeking straight up from my balustrade, staring into deep space, tracing your special star with bobbin lace. I tear up, lovestruck," I hope your dream girl takes her blinders off and finds you before someone else does! It will be your DG's loss if she takes too long!  Linda |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Noah this sounds like a soft romantic song...beautiful!!  |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
"where I vacation every evening, to your sweet, rejuvenating embrace... ...hearing you breathing, breathing in the background..." I could FEEL the beat of this song. And I am in awe of the above lines, especially your original use of "vacation" ... very clever. always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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