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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Surround Sounds it is after a harsh day and I am too old for jangled nerves ragged having dropped all at anyone’s beck and call all having come, collect, and my pockets are worn and empty and it is after such a day when I come into the face of a grizzly grumble for he, too, has had his day but when he spies me he stops, and something somehow, quiets him, I am not sure what, when he makes all the jangled nerves disappear, then gathers me in, with husky sounds of welcome home, little girl and I am surrounded, smoothed by love sounds. |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
I'll sleep tonight dreaming of a grizzly grumble -- I really enjoyed your poem. Thank you. A |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Lady in White, This reflects the kind of relationship we all would love to have....what a gift! *hugs*...jo |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Love your title and how it works within your poem. Those "welcome homes" make it all worthwhile. Here's hoping the days ahead will be less nerve jangling. another for the library...thanks... miscellanea |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
it sounds pleasant and makes all the other stuff seem minimal... very lovely |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Enjoyed. The title brought me in as I can not stand surround sound! It does indeed "jangle the nerves". I do not need to watch a movie or television with noise coming from every direction.It would be so refreshing to have a quiet, gentle hand to come home to. And a quiet home would be nice too. best to you, martyjo |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Fourth read, fifth? I don't know....time to tell you how much this poem moves me, find a way to say, but how? Again, I don't know....but you do, of that at least, I am certain. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
I too am enchanted by this "grizzly grumble" who says welcome home, little girl delightful |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lady Sounds like coming home.  |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
he will always see the girl he fell in love with and who holds his heart Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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