Open Poetry #40 |
God's Domain |
Beatrice Boyle Member
since 2006-12-06
Posts 438 |
I remember I remember When as a child of three My Dad would tell me stories As I sat upon his knee We talked of stars and milky ways And teddy bears and things And about the rain that falls And the flowers that it brings Then when the thunder roared And frightened me in bed He spoke to me so softly And this is what he said You must never be afraid Of what you don’t understand For God will always be here To hold you by the hand And though you may not see him He will always be close by To chase away the dark clouds Whenever he hears you cry For he made the sun and clouds He made the thunder too There is nothing to be afraid of For he made them all for you The thunder is the Lord’s way Of bringing on the rain For the trees and grass are thirsty As are the flowers down the lane The noise the thunder makes Is just to warn you all To fetch your umbrella For the rain is about to fall Then when the storm is over And the sun comes out again You’ll see nature at its best All’s right in God’s domain |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
BB, what a gracious and precious piece of poetic magic! I love the rain ~ and your writing! Love & God's Light, EA |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
What a lovely write! a good commitee can decimate communication. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Amen Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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ivordavies Senior Member
since 2007-01-10
Posts 739Chester, England |
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ We talked of stars and milky ways And teddy bears and things And about the rain that falls And the flowers that it brings ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Bea, This is a brilliant piece of poetry, summed up perfectly in the above, Namste, Ivor |
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icequeen Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633FL USA |
I love this..... Caroline He who wants a rose must respect the thorn. |
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Triskaidekaphobia Member
since 2003-02-05
Posts 251In a state of disrepair... |
"We talked of stars and milky ways And teddy bears and things And about the rain that falls And the flowers that it brings" While not a religeous person I enjoyed this poem, the abvoe quoted lines reminded me of the following; "The time has come," the Walrus said, "To talk of many things: Of shoes--and ships--and sealing-wax-- Of cabbages--and kings-- And why the sea is boiling hot-- And whether pigs have wings." This pleases me greatly Thus concludes my fairly aimless reply. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
lovely very lovely write Bea |
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Beatrice Boyle Member
since 2006-12-06
Posts 438 |
Thanks Earth Angel, I wrote this for my grandson when he was about 4 yrs. old. Bea |
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Beatrice Boyle Member
since 2006-12-06
Posts 438 |
Hi Kethry...glad you enjoyed it. Bea |
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Beatrice Boyle Member
since 2006-12-06
Posts 438 |
Hi Interloper. Bea |
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Beatrice Boyle Member
since 2006-12-06
Posts 438 |
Thanks Ivor... It's funny what pops in your head when you try to comfort your grandchildren... of the many things we talked about, this is one he remembers! Bea |
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Beatrice Boyle Member
since 2006-12-06
Posts 438 |
Thank you Caroline, so glad you liked it! Bea |
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Beatrice Boyle Member
since 2006-12-06
Posts 438 |
Hi Trisk...as for your "aimless"reply...I actually based this on that children's poem! Bea |
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Beatrice Boyle Member
since 2006-12-06
Posts 438 |
Thanks Shadows...glad you enjoyed it. Bea |
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