Open Poetry #40 |
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supposing the stillness calm |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
of silent gusts from wind-swept wisps of passing time to stillness as it lays in muted tombs of calm repose so rests the soul whose breadth and depths sublime bequeath its essence bare to tranquility’s closest floes and bids the stillness of that calm to gently ride the night and branch the rampage of its course to segregate its force into quiet streams and rivulets of light that curtail the resonant finger-like stems that stimulate the heart to breath, exhaling, inhaling, breathing deep within swallowing life and all its schemes, love and all its dreams quietly, calmly, supposing the stillness calm, but then ebbs as waters abate while morning moonlight dis-enbeams disenchantment’s dreams |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
whew, this was engrossing and gave me chills, very well done |
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Ratleader![]()
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
The pacing and tone of this, almost like an incantation....perfect for the message. Well done! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Masterful writing IMO........saving it. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
and bids the stillness of that calm to gently ride the night ... the heart to breath, exhaling, inhaling, breathing deep within ... my two favorite lines. Thank you, Sir. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
the title caught me..the rest will hold me all day |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
This reminded me of a river, flowing through time. Outstanding write. TD |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
a feel of the older style in this poem which is right up my alley major kudos you did a nice job |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
awesome work |
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