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love speak (the michael poems)
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love speak (the michael poems) |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest 
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when we speak love we speak words of wood smoke words that drift across desert to forever never seen again we speak spin and drift float we speak the smell of your life familiar on my hands silken webs woven skyward when we speak love we speak of blood tea sipped slowly my sleep sounding voice stealing into your dreams telling you history in oak carved words when we speak love we speak of forever and more likely …never and always there is your mantra yes my heart I will… when you are ready |
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sewasham Senior Member
since 2006-09-11
Posts 714Oklahoma, USA |
Love your imagery. Great stuff. Take care and Have fun. Steve |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
love it all, but think I love these lines best "we speak the smell of your life familiar on my hands silken webs woven skyward" excellent write |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you Steve thank you so much Steaven |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
oh my oh my! Lady Kate... simply stunning! how brilliant a poet are you !!  RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
stunning as usual |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"when we speak love we speak words of wood smoke words that drift across desert to forever never seen again" ~ With a captivating opening stanza such as that, how could I help but read on! Gosh, you're good, Lady Kate! Actually, yer greeaaat! Love your love writing! lol Loves 'n hugs, Linda |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lady I like your O Henry ending. "when you are ready" Or which door is the tiger behind. Enjoyed |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
Kate your words paint a wonderful picture. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
my sleep sounding voice stealing into your dreams telling you history in oak carved words What loves does to your soul, you bring to your pen... and you share oh so very well.  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lady Kate The patience of love waits...and it is always the right time in the heart. What a lovely poem! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
doggone it Roniece you say the nicest things thank you thank you kindly Dixie oh Linda Angel thank you forevermore thank you Sir Sy it’s my favorite part the not knowing thank you kindly Bill oh Karilea thank you it’s amazing what love does to the soul…  well, you know oh Martie what a beautiful reply I’m saving it |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
We speak.... you speak... I sigh. MoonShadow . |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lady Kate~Your writing is beyond beautiful!! In the midst of winter, |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
MoonShadow thank you so kindly for the sigh thank you sweetly Nancy |
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icequeen Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633FL USA |
Absolutely an eloquent, stirring, moving piece of work. Poetry at its best! It just takes my breath away how beautiful this is....and the last line is of course, perfect. Caroline He who wants a rose must respect the thorn. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Caroline you are so kind thank you... |
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wredgranny Member
since 2006-11-18
Posts 493Ky. USA |
Sigi My Lady sister for the sharing of your sift beauty,do you know you heritage speaks written within you words? Those things Sacred to the People are known,written on you soul!
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed..yes, we have to let the hearts make up their own mind...James |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
wa do Granny I can see that my heritage does speak itself when you mention it… that pleases me thank you James |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
Smooth and lovely. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Sandra! It's so good to see you here! Thank you my friend. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Elegant and Lovely Kate. Hugs sweetie. |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
This is very good John |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you Gentle Donna hugs to you... thank you John |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
Lady, I rarely respond . . . So I would very much like to add your poem, with your permission, to my Word File of poems by others. It would be in good company . . . What name, if you will, would you have on it? John |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Thank you very much John. I am flattered. My name is Kate. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I see you are multi-lingual Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
that's me Doctor Love  made me laugh |
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