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Robert Jordan
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since 2007-02-07
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Philadelphia Pa USA

0 posted 2007-07-14 09:03 AM


Angelo,
he’s got it all.
Oh yeah.  

He’s got the cat,
he’s got the dog,
he’s got the pretty Mom,
and the big tough Dad.  

Mainly,
he’s got his priorities straight,
and in just the right order.
Oh yeah.

Bobby

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Magnus
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1 posted 2007-07-14 03:27 PM


This sort of reminds me of a man who has
everything on the outside and suffers
terribly on the inside....

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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2 posted 2007-07-15 06:42 AM


I like your stories of Angelo Bobby, they mesmerise me RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Robert Jordan
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3 posted 2007-07-15 04:08 PM


Magnus,

All kids suffer terribly on the inside.  It's part of the process.

RDB,

Thanks for the good words.  I enjoy writing them.

Bobby

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