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Rick
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Victoria, Australia

0 posted 2007-07-14 05:46 AM


There’s some out there who’ll never see
The coming of what’s meant to be
That place where souls again are free
Defiant to that view

Yet you will find that they all pray
No matter what they do or say
And that with hope they dream away
Of land that’s bright and new

They may scoff and some deny
The praise or warmth in their reply
Say their piece of truth or lie
For that’s just what they do

Some believe and some may not
That’s the gift of choice we’ve got
One with some and one the lot
The different me and you

And none of us do really know
Until that time when we all go
Meeting fate and ends bestow
Then finding what is true

But until then I’ll dream and write
Share my dark and share my light
Giving as a good friend might
While sharing all I do


© Copyright 2007 Rick Van Weenen - All Rights Reserved
ivordavies
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since 2007-01-10
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Chester, England
1 posted 2007-07-14 06:32 AM


Rick,

Looks like we drink from the same cup!

Ivor

Rick
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2 posted 2007-07-14 07:01 AM


Ivor , it does appear that way my friend, good to see you reply here, have a great day and be well. Stange how these things happen isn't it, there's something out there.

Rick

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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3 posted 2007-07-14 07:20 AM


But until then I’ll dream and write
Share my dark and share my light
Giving as a good friend might
While sharing all I do


yes... you do this very well my friend RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Klassy Lassy
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since 2005-06-28
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Oregon
4 posted 2007-07-14 08:52 AM


It is true that how we live
is a choice to take or give.
In the end, whatever choice,
action is what gives it voice.
Gentle hue of voice and letter
makes me wish I'd done it better. ~ KL

Rick
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Victoria, Australia
5 posted 2007-07-14 09:07 AM


Roniece, hello my friend, thank you so much for your reply, great to see you again, take care and be well.

KL, great to have you reply, if I motivated this response I am glad, you have done it so well, have a great day.

To you both my friends, again thank you for your replies, always much appreciated and heart felt.

Bye for now
Rick


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6 posted 2007-07-14 09:38 AM


Rick,

Your message is so great,  given so simply
and everlasting.  It only requires faith and
belief in that which we are told.

You say it all so easily.

Rick
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Victoria, Australia
7 posted 2007-07-14 09:47 AM


Hello Magnus, great to see you visit once again my friend, your reply was very much heart felt and appreciated, I am glad to have shared it tonight.

Rick

JamesMichael
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8 posted 2007-07-14 05:42 PM


As in the days of Jesus there were believers and unbelievers...James
Rick
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Victoria, Australia
9 posted 2007-07-15 06:22 AM


Hi James, good to see you visit again my friend, you are right; it is nicer to believe in something I think.
Have a great day and take care.

Rick

Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural
10 posted 2007-11-05 04:01 PM


yes, their are believers and unBelievers

ARCTIC WIND

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