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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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light dares us to come in like an enormous hand in faithful evolution fair and loving leaping flames like a rich cloak of scattered droplets entralling rendezvous passionately untamed powerfully connected internally married to an intimate side of life reclaimed urging incantations of damp spring air hoping to catch the lofty title of human reasoning within an unspoken truce beyond compare flushed with color unable to deny imagination entirely coincidental a benevolent embrace teaching an artist's vision steeped in a summer's amber gaze like a breeze ripples corn whispering soft a threshold of voice intensified hawthorn lined white face of the full curve of destiny's breast sworn to wisdom of shepards dancing grass pulses through like a healing balm of love on a thread of mystery belonging to virtue and to you |
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Robert Jordan Member
since 2007-02-07
Posts 392Philadelphia Pa USA |
LeeJ, This stream of counciousness poem leans more towards Joyce's "Finnegans Wake" than his "Ulysses". I never could get into "Finnegans Wake". Bobby |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"entralling rendezvous passionately untamed powerfully connected internally married to an intimate side of life reclaimed" Great write LeeJ. Love this verse. Libertine: "He didn't resist temptation. He pursued it." JL  What I used to do with one hand tied behind my back now requires every muscle in my body, cohesively. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow Lee this is not something one should read while being buzzed on Miller Chill I might just have gotten some inspiration! But sleep might get me first. *sigh* I'll have to come back to this |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Wow , Lee this had a wonderful feeling flowing through this Hope |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
fine 'write'! I particularly LOVE this imagery: “a benevolent embrace teaching an artist's vision steeped in a summer's amber gaze” “like a breeze ripples corn whispering soft a threshold of voice” “dancing grass pulses… like a healing balm of love on a thread of mystery belonging to virtue and to you” Applause!! |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
very much enjoyed write! ARCTIC WIND |
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