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wordwizard
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on the way to next world

0 posted 2007-07-12 10:29 PM


the Avon lady predicted
he would walk
the desert
with his host

she would sell her wares
then there was this crystal ball
one used to motion
spirtual awakenings
of the third kind
dune sagas
rifts of sands
coursing through velvet hands

The Avon lady rang
doorbells under crisp blue skies
offered heavenly moisterizers
for angel-like complexions
to cover thise damn spots
referring to that picture
of the steps along the ripples
dunes that sifted
spirtually shifted
under a cloak
he would walk
in desert heats.

Until the day the son
did walk and drop
without a drop of water
his maker did not come
to carry him across
she was disappointed
threw her crystal ball away
there was no spiritual awakening
just desert collapses
shifted sands
passing through velvet
gloved hands
until her city too
would lie buried
under windswept dunes
laced with unknown footprints...


[This message has been edited by wordwizard (07-13-2007 06:34 PM).]

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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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1 posted 2007-07-14 08:45 AM


Nice writing...James
wordwizard
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since 2003-09-08
Posts 483
on the way to next world
2 posted 2007-07-14 01:12 PM


Thanks James, wishing you a good summer to you and many more pleasant poems..who knows where the writing will take me...


Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16
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Realm of Supernatural
3 posted 2007-11-05 03:56 PM


ENJOYED

ARCTIC WIND

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