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Quiet Time |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Quiet Time Quiet time with you is Reading as light filters Through the window in Pastels of dusk Listening to the swell of Music lift around us Knowing that we are twins Of the soul Linked by history that Precedes us Forged by futures together Quiet time with you Flirts with passions untouched Memories of lessons learned Who we are together And what we are not afraid To share Quiet time with you Erupts in an explosion of need Physical touching Minds merging erotic Dreams once held close Now shared In the quiet time with you --- Alison [This message has been edited by aziza (07-12-2007 11:04 AM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Quiet time can be explosive... in art, music, thought, word, deed...indeed! check your email! |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
A grand-lovely and effectively emotive 'write' [although, one tiny point...I would love to see you lose the word 'reeks' from an otherwise rather sterling piece] I particularly admire: "Quiet time with you is Reading as light filters Through the window in Pastels of dusk Listening to the swell of Music lift around us Knowing that we are twins Of the soul Linked by history that Precedes us Forged by futures together (!)" serious sustained applause!! |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
I totally agree with the word "reeks" -- thanks for bringing it to my attention .. and thank you for supporting me as you do. Alison |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms az, some of my favorite time this, enjoyed it ms |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
Quiet times...I remember those. Lovely and very softly ~ sensual. Reek though is quite an odorous word and appears to take away from the actual meaning of this great read. |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Sunshine - Thank you for the suggestions and help that you so kindly offered. I appreciate you so much. You are a beautiful woman. Alison |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Daark Quiet time is what feeds me. Know what I mean? A ---------------------- SPIRIT Thank you for reading and understanding. A ---------------------- And ya'll, I kicked 'reek' to the curb. What was I thinking anyway? Beats me. Thanks and hugs Alison |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
Absolutely beautiful. and as always. enjoyed the quietness and the softness |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Alison, just wonderful, I hope each word is so true for you, if so you are one lucky woman. Loved the read and your passion. Have a wonderful day. Rick |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"as light filters Through the window in Pastels of dusk" Bravo!a fine write, lady Alison |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I could use a little quiet time myself  good write, made me smile |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
a magnificent expolosion in quiet time Alison |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
read again. long for a quiet time for myself. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Alison... this is beautiful! I love my quiet time too! RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Beatiful ARCTIC WIND |
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Dadygoose Member
since 2010-01-01
Posts 162A Communist country |
What could be more real than fantasies and dreams? Hey, nobody's human! |
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Dadygoose Member
since 2010-01-01
Posts 162A Communist country |
This makes me smile when I reread this and takes my imagination away as though reading it for the first time, dreams I can barely write or talk about. There is no substitute for absolute honesty and this write just crackles with it. So many greatful embraces, ali friendly J Hey, nobody's human! |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Jaime, Thank you from the bottom of my heart. Alison |
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