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Arius Miura de Galdri
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since 2007-07-04
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Michigan, USA

0 posted 2007-07-10 05:45 PM


"Mortality"

Mortality, man's greatest foe
I pray that you will answer this:
Why is it that you curse us so,
Why can't our days be limitless?

So silently I sit and wait
For soon I feel that I will know
The secret that controls my fate
No answer is forthcoming, though

Mortality, man's greatest fear
Unconquerable enemy
Perhaps I just refused to hear
The answer that you've given me

Eternal bringer of despair
I turn and know I've been a fool
Whatever made me think you'd care?
O wicked creature, dark and cruel...

AMdG

"My candle burns at both ends; it will not last the night; but ah, my foes, and oh, my friends--it gives a lovely light!"  -Edna St. Vincent Millay

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ivordavies
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since 2007-01-10
Posts 739
Chester, England
1 posted 2007-07-10 05:53 PM


Arius,

Found this an extremely interesting piece of work, food for thought....

Ivor

Dominique-Simone
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since 2005-11-12
Posts 643

2 posted 2007-07-11 10:51 PM


If life was never ending, how would we learn to appreaciate what we had, and love the way we do? Additionally what would we have to fight for, how would we know what was worth our attention or not. Death does not condem us it makes life worth living.

Nice write

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