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secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

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a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2007-07-11 12:18 PM

          Beyond the Music of Her Soul

             Along angry streets
             of shimmering haze
             stifling in doorways,
             where a brutal sun rages
             to simmer in silence,
             and time is too loud
             as destiny thunders,
             for poet-frail 'voices'
               to soar,
             (on wings of disconsolate
               words)
             through the dust and
               the boredom,
             and all that is lost...
             beyond the music
              of her soul!

ArtSolstice
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since 2007-03-18

Posts 498

1 posted 2007-07-11 08:46 AM

What a magnificent treat to read --
"and time is too loud" -- so well said!

The alliteration of all those "s"es make this summer write fry... I can feel the heat rising from it.

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

2 posted 2007-07-11 08:52 AM

A beautiful heartsong!

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

3 posted 2007-07-11 09:39 AM

through the dust and
               the boredom,
             and all that is lost...
             beyond the music
              of her soul!

this spoke volumns and I could invision a young girl, dancing alone in her room...

Robert Jordan
Member

since 2007-02-07

Posts 392
Philadelphia Pa USA

4 posted 2007-07-11 11:19 AM

Secondhanddreampoet,

Well, I don't know about the boredom. The heats around right now, and it might get dusty, and it's loud and somewhat brazen, but I can't find any boredom here in town.

Actually, a little boredom wouldn't be all that bad, or unwelcome.

Bobby

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

5 posted 2007-07-11 12:32 PM

"Beyond the Music of Her Soul"

~ even the beauty of that captivating title, was worth the read!!!

Linda

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

6 posted 2007-07-11 02:06 PM

this shimmers and sizzles
and tonight
the loudness will return

thunderstorms on the horizon....
and I look forward to more thunder from your fine quill

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

7 posted 2007-07-11 06:47 PM

Again lovely imagery and great use of alliteration in this piece. Your free verse has such nice flow...something that not everyone understands that all poetry must have

Ruth

Dominique-Simone
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since 2005-11-12

Posts 643

8 posted 2007-07-11 10:28 PM

WOW

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