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Felix Can't Sleep
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Felix Can't Sleep |
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Robert Jordan Member
since 2007-02-07
Posts 392Philadelphia Pa USA 
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Felix lies in bed at night. He can’t sleep, no, not at all. He can’t get that stinking creep James out of his head. Sally wanted to mess James up, and Felix talked her out of it. Maybe that was a mistake. Now it bothers him. He has to do something. He’d really like to put the hurts on the little worm hard, after what he and Sally went through at their house, but what? He can’t just forget about, all the beatings and humiliation they both suffered in that place. He has to think of something. It’s driving him nuts. Bobby [This message has been edited by Robert Jordan (07-12-2007 05:00 PM).] |
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Robert Jordan Member
since 2007-02-07
Posts 392Philadelphia Pa USA |
Gone from here--over and out |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
I missed Felix again it seems  |
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Robert Jordan Member
since 2007-02-07
Posts 392Philadelphia Pa USA |
Ruth, You didn't miss much. No one seemed to like it. Bobby |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
many of us likely didn't have a chance to read it! |
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Robert Jordan Member
since 2007-02-07
Posts 392Philadelphia Pa USA |
Okay Hoot_owl_rn, and Secondhandpoet, I put it back up. Bobby |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
LOL, you crack me up, Bobby. Thanks for the repost, as I am following the saga of these two closely. Even though I may not reply to each adventure, I do read them. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
we hang on the cusp of 'rapt expectation' pursuant to what Felix will do next! most interesting continuation of this effectively realistic narrative! [a 'writing style' for which (sadly) I have absolutely no 'aptitude'!] applause!! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Bobby, I do read these when I get a chance to get on and go through I'm glad you put it back up because I do enjoy them |
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Robert Jordan Member
since 2007-02-07
Posts 392Philadelphia Pa USA |
Thanks Dear Friends, I'll keep you all up to date about what Sally and Felix are into. They appreciate your concern also. They’re good kids, and not near as bad as people would have you believe. Bobby |
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