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secondhanddreampoet
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0 posted 2007-07-11 06:31 PM


           Crater Lake

Wizard and Phantom Ship islands…
glide the gentle sunset-lake
fine-mirrored in amber laced
   lapis-blue,
and framed by ancient
   guardian pines,
that grace the crater rim…
grand 'Deep-Time' sentinels!
  
                 ~

[This message has been edited by secondhanddreampoet (07-12-2007 09:46 AM).]

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LeeJ
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1 posted 2007-07-11 06:36 PM


ohhhh wow, I enjoyed this to the max...extremely creative and magical...well worth the read, as always....
hoot_owl_rn
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2 posted 2007-07-11 06:44 PM


Okay...now you got me reading these things and I with work that needs be done am hooked on the imagery in your lines
Ruth

ArtSolstice
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3 posted 2007-07-12 05:32 PM


Fine word-art! Especially enjoyable:

"fine-mirrored in amber laced
   lapis-blue,"    

and

"    ancient
   guardian pines,"

" grand 'Deep-Time' sentinels! "

Wonderful to think of ancient pines as 'Deep-Time' sentinels!
  

Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
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4 posted 2007-07-12 05:37 PM


beautiful again. How I missed this one.

enjoyed

Snowflake From Hell
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5 posted 2007-07-12 06:42 PM


very nice

I am the little cracked mirror

passing shadows
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6 posted 2007-07-12 08:12 PM


wonderful imagery


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