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Fairplay
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since 2007-01-15
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England

0 posted 2007-07-07 08:47 PM



Duhh Burnt Again !
Forgot the Sun
All I wanted
Was some FUN

Eric

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ivordavies
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since 2007-01-10
Posts 739
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1 posted 2007-07-10 06:11 PM


Fun and Sun
you know the game.
You play with fire
you bear the pain.

Precautions bah!
they spoil the Fun.
But at what cost
when game is done.

Fairplay
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since 2007-01-15
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2 posted 2007-07-11 12:53 PM


Thanks Ivor

Thanks Ivor

You know like water the sun has become well exploited by the commercial world. The cost of xxx sun protection !!!

Of course with sensible precautions you can avoid getting sunburnt.

Unlike your good self who used to smother cooking oil on your body and spend the whole year frying…… teaching people to water-ski in Penang Malaya.

I suppose the actual coconut oil did protect your skin from absorbing too much water.

When I used to teach sail-boarding in Hong Kong I never used sun cream just a long sleeved T shirt and a sun hat ….. The sun still managed to get through !

Strange neither of us ever had the time or inclination to sit at the side of a swimming pool or on the beach for the sole purpose of getting burnt….. I think they call that sunbathing….

Eric

aziza
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since 2006-07-09
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3 posted 2007-07-11 06:34 PM


You made me smile as I burn so easily.  I always want to play in the sun, but I do pay later if I am not careful.

Alison

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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4 posted 2007-07-11 06:35 PM


short sweet and so true....

great write

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