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The Shores of Unrequited Love
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The Shores of Unrequited Love |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! 
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The Shores of Unrequited Love Crimson-legion clouds tipped in gentle gold, (by a brush of saffron-sunrise) march the fine cerulean sky above murmuring mountains, lonely and timeless… beyond a slice of silent sea shimmering in the morning mist, where forlorn and tattered hearts break upon the shores of unrequited love! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
lovely poet and it's your colors that seem to be catching on the edges of my imagination lately "(by a brush of saffron-sunrise)" |
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Winter Butterfly Member
since 2007-02-03
Posts 61The hidden path beyond the ivy gate. |
Wake me when the dream is over. Your imagery is perfect. ~Winter~ "I used to worry what people thought of me, then I broke through my cacoon" |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Bruce... just wonderful words here!! RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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ArtSolstice Member
since 2007-03-18
Posts 498 |
There is an entire universe in this poem. |
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Robert Jordan Member
since 2007-02-07
Posts 392Philadelphia Pa USA |
Secondhanddreampoet, Unrequited love should be avoided by everyone. Nice writing. Bobby |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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paullallady Member
since 2007-04-03
Posts 262Michigan |
what amazing imagery. beautiful poem. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
forlorn and tattered hearts break upon the shores of unrequited love! It is definitely one hellaciously hard landing surface! *S* Well written... I enjoyed! *S* |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Again another beautiful poem filled with lovely imagery. There are a few words here I can't say I've ever seen in a poem before  Me thinks you have a great handle on the English language fine Sir Ruth |
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