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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States 
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Change By Larry Chadwick It happens upon reflection, Usually following some correction. That what you thought you knew, Is totally different after review. If the conscience were not ignored, And regrets were not just abhorred… Then perhaps actions would be changed, And outcomes completely rearranged. But mercy gives us more than we deserve, When we find forgiveness without reserve. And growth is better late than never, Especially when it is with love forever. July 7, 2007 If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Those last two lines pull this together perfectly Larry. I loved this. You have been missed round here sweet mister. 
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
sir, you are absolutely right and the poem is well rhymed. You shall join the backyard philosophical discussion. enjoyed your beautiful poem. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fine writing...James |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
"And growth is better late than never, Especially when it is with love forever." I do indeed believe this to be absolutely correct. Enjoyed the read and message. Thank you. |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Larry This is a wonderful poem. It is one that I'll read again - Thank you. Alison |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
And what old wiseman whispered these little bits of wisdom in your ears? (singular or plural?) ear/ears//??? Well done Larry C. |
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Dominique-Simone Senior Member
since 2005-11-12
Posts 643 |
Well written and well read... thank you for posting. |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
There is a lot of truth and wisdom in this, Larry. I wholeheartedly agree. We are given many changes, many chances, and correction is good, because it results in growth. Loved this, my friend.  Best wishes and hugs, /Kit |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Enjoyed your words here Larry, the last lines brought it all home for me. But mercy gives us more than we deserve, When we find forgiveness without reserve. And growth is better late than never, Especially when it is with love forever. Thanks for sharing. Rick |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is true, indeed, Larry. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Donna, Thanks for such kind words. I do keep an eye on the place. I dont' write a lot lately and when I do it is usually prose. I hope all is well with you.  Drauntz, Thank you. But no philosopher in me.Thanks James. It's nice to see you. Honeybunch, How nice to see you. And thank you. I have friends visiting Africa for the next three weeks. Alison, Thank you so much. It is definitely based on experience. And I must tell you how truly blessed I am. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Magnus, It wasn't so much it got whispered in my ear (singular) as it got beat over my head and then patted on my cheek. Either way I am amazingly blessed. And thank you kind sir for noticing.Dominique-Simone, It is nice to meet you and thank you for your kind words. Kit, Well it seems us (meaning me) hard headed people get our growth best in hard times and painful lessons. And you have no idea how much I value and respect your thoughts and opinions. Thank you Kit.  Rick, I can't believe you have been here so long and we haven't met. It's nice to meet you and thank you a bunch. SmartChick, Ah, thanks. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
You do know that I think "change" is a dirty word... right up there with those not allowed on Open? LOL But this is so lovely... especially the last verse!!! *S* |
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Deb Lynne Member
since 1999-08-19
Posts 180Where blue skies meet blue ocean |
I haven't been around for ages...and there have always been certain people I read...you being one of my favorites. Glad I found this. Deb |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
"And growth is better late than never, Especially when it is with love forever." "That's the way love grows." Just like it should. I've missed your strong-tender words. well now, ain't you something with your new haircut in your picture. How cute |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Larry, my friend...although there is a playful quality to this poem, it is much deeper than a swing...it is wise, like a park. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Larry, you have a phenomenal amount of love and wisdom for someone who looks as young as you still do.  As you give, so may you always receive! Lovin' hug, Linda P.S. Don't be such a stranger! You and your poetry have been missed.  |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Ruthie, Yeah, but at least my dirty words don't require astericks to get through!  And I really am glad you popped in, thanks.Reg, And you should see my shaggy self now! Always I appreciate your opinion and kind words. Thank you.Martie, You always have a way of stretching my mind. I like that. And you very much. Linda, Guess maybe that's why I don't feel so old. And bless you for being such a dear and faithful friend. Thanks.  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
ROFL... It just wouldn't be right for us to have to thump your knuckles. *G* But it's STILL a dirty word, Ron or not! LOL |
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