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gheber Junior Member
since 2002-12-04
Posts 23Milwaukee, WI |
Too kind, too happy, too much fun How can this be so? And where’s this place called “Nowhere”, That so many people go? “Chillin’” don’t mean “getting’ cold” Good is “bad”, and thin is “Phat” And how can something that we do Be known as “where it’s at”? From its shell a goose is hatched And joins the other geese But Mom and Dad and Baby Moose Still don’t make three meese Friends will stab you in the back While strangers call you “Dear” And “I’ll be back in just a minute” Is what she said last year © 2007 Gerry E. Heber, All Rights Reserved |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
quite sad. but a very good poem. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
My first read this morning, and you nailed this one. This was quietly explosive.  |
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Dominique-Simone Senior Member
since 2005-11-12
Posts 643 |
It is sad I agree, but powerful. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
glad I didn't miss this one it's the way I feel too and you wrote it so well |
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