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and freckles were perfect
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and freckles were perfect |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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you talked about the canyons with trees as if they were real people just without cowboy hats you baited your own hook and said the worms didn't mind if you kissed them first I told you about gourmet soup you said I should try yours so I stirred it for hours and asked you for more but you said you were too tired maybe tomorrow if I still wanted and then you swallowed and pretended to spill more for a reason to unbutton more buttons so I could sleep with your mind's eyes ____________ daark |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Oh, I like this. It reminds me of --- Well, I went on this fishing trip last summer and the guys I was with had worms. I had never fished with worms! So, they took turns baiting my hook, but, ya know, I can bait my own hook. So, I did. I dropped this worm in the water when I was fishing off the bank. It was only part of a worm - and you know, about 15 minutes later, I look down and it is wiggling on the bottom of the lake. They are incredible! So, I saved it and took it home with me. I figured any worm with that will to live deserved to live. Named him "Harvey" and the cats ended up getting him. so .. that's the story of Harvey. I love your poetry. A |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
I slip into the dark for a moment and I got to feel your essence~ love the touch of your soul, and the smile your spirit leaves on "my heart" My spirit will rise |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms az, I have a buddy that shared fishing worms with his city girl friend...pretended to eat a couple to prove that the fish would like them..she hurled...but later he found all of them missing from the fridge, she told him where were good with peanut butter..he hurled.. _________ msgroves, thanks lady for the eyes and spirit |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Mr Daark... enjoyed as always.. I would like to fish one day!  RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
stranger darlin' the worms never mind if you kiss them first I prefer fly fishing though |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Ahh D, you took me back to quiet times along the banks fishing under the moonlight with big ole nightcrawlers till early morning hours. Sweet memories. Much enjoyed this one big d.  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms r&b thanks, come up to calif, will show you around some fishing holes. ___________ ladyone, yes flys are very attractive for some...bet you are an artist? thanks ms ___________ ms donna, thanks babe, glad to take you back some. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Your poetry is so lovely... I hope you know that, D. I respect, so much, your ability. Just know that. and this title was perfect  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms serene, you are such a kewl lady...thanks for reading and the smile making comment. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
the poem made me remember... the side stories made me giggle... cheese balls... they love cheese balls.  |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
"Perfect freckles" of your mind's art. It's so much fun to connect them and grin. Love, reg |
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Dominique-Simone Senior Member
since 2005-11-12
Posts 643 |
The ending really ties this one together. |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
just another time to... connect the dots |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sun, thank you for smiling through this one ___________ regalone, dot to dot to dot and a life time to make new tattoos in my mind, thanks babe, cherish D _____________ ms domsi' thank you for the read and comment ms ______________ ms slick, ooooowwww you make me smile wickedly, thanks babe |
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ladylisa Member
since 2007-04-29
Posts 342Florida USA |
Freckles are a beautiful thing As always loved the poem. Have a good one. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
I like to fish, but I sure don't like those worms. I have just about every kind of fishing lure you can think of. LOL! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms lisa, thanks ms for the reply ___________ ms smart, thanks and we must go fishing sometime |
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