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Our haven without ends,
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Open Poetry #40
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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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0 posted 2007-07-03 09:02 PM

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As we passed
A whole life passed
Before my eyes


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Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
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1 posted 2007-07-03 09:08 PM

A whole life passed

life here means a living thing or from beginning to end? or both?

have a wonderful holiday sir John!!!!
Robert Jordan
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since 2007-02-07
Posts 392
Philadelphia Pa USA
2 posted 2007-07-03 09:24 PM

Huan Yi,

Cute little poem.  It's true of everyone we pass, isn't it.  It doesn't take much to see everything.

Bobby
Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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Waukegan
3 posted 2007-07-03 09:29 PM

Thank you both

Bobby, I have known in an instant
my own life would have been much different.

Thanks again

John
PazSqual
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since 2003-11-17
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4 posted 2007-07-03 11:23 PM

Thank you Huan Yi,

Paz
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