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exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada 
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Cold hands on warm skin can you feel the tension within my body movements where none were I will let my clothes of words fall gathered on the ground with the damp grass and embers still burning within each letter You may read me but I will not let you be the period which finnishes me |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Lovely, exhale. Just a little typo - finishes - guess the fingers can get excited too.  |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
This is REALLY good (particularly the ending!) sustained applause!! |
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MarkG Junior Member
since 2007-06-21
Posts 48California USA |
I love the form, the feelings, and the thoughts, I had to read it very slow to try and find your meaning and purpose, my search of your words is deep as I sit here and ponder your work of art. Great. tc Mark from Calif. |
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