Open Poetry #40 |
The garden and the gardener |
Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
THE GARDEN AND THE GARDENER I harvest what is in my mind I seed and then a crop I find Forgetting what was left behind For colour fills my day A desert that was once so bare Before I found my flowers there Does grant me all I have to share And give along the way Swaying with the breeze of thought Where once I found the questions fought And where my ponder often sought I frolic now and play Within there’s peace and rockery Beauty once I could not see A hiding place made just for me Where now I go each day A scenery of inner eye A well where sadness once could cry A chest that holds all days gone by And where I love to stay So here I garden in my mind Relax and then my visions find Forgetting all I left behind And loving everyday |
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MarkG Junior Member
since 2007-06-21
Posts 48California USA |
wow.....this is brilliant...its also very positive and healthy and hopeful...so many great lines here... ----- A well where sadness once could cry A chest that holds all days gone by ----- very impressive work Mark |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
What can I say Mark, but thank you very much for your wonderful comments here, they were very much appreciated and heart felt. Take care till again we speak. Rick |
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RogueandPoet Member
since 2007-06-04
Posts 126Oregon |
Great one Rick. Perfect! |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
RogueandPoet, thank you for your visit and reply, well appreciated. Rick |
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Gifted Member
since 2007-06-26
Posts 140Caribbean |
Excellent poem Rick. It just flowed SO nicely. It reminds me of my poem "The Hopeful Gardener". Very well thought out, and put together. Once again, excellent work Rick. Peace. Love. Forgiveness. |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Gifted, so nice to see your reply here, it would be nice to read your poem, so please send it, I will enjoy. Thank you so much for your time and reply, much appreciated. Rick |
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Gifted Member
since 2007-06-26
Posts 140Caribbean |
Well actually Rick, I posted it on this forum already, but rather than having you look for it, I'll make it easier for you and post it right here. "The Hopeful Gardener" One seed, one chance, one life that he holds. His eyes shiver although, it's a hot summer day. Each swallow is sharp, and stabs the back of his throat, with memories of despair. Each step he takes brings him higher on a ladder of uncertainty. He's nervous, and enthusiastic, sweat glands dance in his palm. The salty secretion, and dirt stained crevices, create a crude sand. Along with sea shores of anxiety in each of his hands. Does he compress his fists firmly, to show his affection towards the unborn green plant? Perhaps he can not go through with it no longer, and wishes to terminate all the possibilities cocooned in his head, that have been waiting to spread out it's wings of reality. But his dreams seem to stay buried, just as his prior attempts to a garden. Is his green thumb nothing but gangrene, that has only been spreading to his attempts for success? No, he will not be at the mercy of failure. So in one last desperate attempt, he hesitantly reaches for his pick. Peace. Love. Forgiveness. |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Gifted, this is indeed a great poem you have shown me, I did like this line. Is his green thumb nothing but gangrene? How many gardeners must feel this way once or twice. Thank you for sharing this, enjoyed. Rick |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
"I harvest what is in my mind I seed and then a crop I find Forgetting what was left behind For colour fills my day" This is the absolute truth. I remember reading a poem of yours a while back in which you eloquently discussed "The Secret." This is a beautiful reminder of the Laws of Attraction...what we think about does manifest. Patricia |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Hi Patricia, lovely to see you here, thank you so much for your reply and for reading my poem the secret, the law of attraction, what we think about does manifest is something I believe in and try to live by. Great to see you here tonight, your visit was much appreciated. Rick |
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Gifted Member
since 2007-06-26
Posts 140Caribbean |
Thanks for the comment Rick. No prob sharing my work with you. Peace. Love. Forgiveness. |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
an extroidanary way with words~ a pleasure to read~ My spirit will rise |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
beautiful and imaginative enjoyed |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
MGROVES, a pleasure to receive your reply here my friend, thank you so much for the visit and time, very much appreciated. Drauntz, lovely to have you here, thank you for your comment, heart felt. Rick |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
How very lovely! *S* This was just what my afternoon needed... respite in a beautiful garden. *S* |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Hi suthern, great to get your reply my friend, thank you so much for the visit, it is much appreciated. Rick |
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