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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2007-07-01 01:09 AM


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At night in yellow light
The leaves of the trees
Are faintly autumn


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Drauntz
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1 posted 2007-07-01 01:48 AM



At down in blue moon
the dews of last frost
are sighs of spring

Drauntz
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2 posted 2007-07-01 02:47 AM


This is a extreme beauty.

A yellow light on tree leaves make a scene of autumn...beautiful imagination

a marvelous piece

I shall write something like

At down the twilight
the blossom of snowpear
the winter memory

still not comparable.


Martie
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3 posted 2007-07-01 08:54 PM


You are a master at these.
passing shadows
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4 posted 2007-07-01 08:58 PM


beautiful
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