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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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 I want to wear indifference in my eyes when you look too deep and let decorous drape across this soul of mine lest you be versed in the language of me and let me be coated in restraint when the sound of your voice rains upon my heart puddling my love at your feet… exposing that I am but a fool so helplessly in love with you ~SEA~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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FNG Member
since 2006-02-07
Posts 477 |
sensual...  can feel the drape over already... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
and I would only beg a thread to tug on the mantle of your safety enjoyed this ms |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
lest you be versed in the language of me and let me be coated in restraint when the sound of your voice rains upon my heart soulfilled love exquisite |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
What a fine poetess ye be! ~ and one of the most romantic writers that I have had the pleasure of reading. Like the sea, your poetry is timeless. Loving hug, EA |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ I LOVE it !!! Naturally the wonderful graphic suits me to a 'T'~  But ... you do passionate poetry justice with just your well worded thoughts~  *HUGLETS*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
grand-fine Romanticism! [excellent write!!] sustained applause! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a gorgeous piece! |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
you all are so sweet, thank you so much |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
LOved this, my friend... jwesley |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Sea, read this a few times and just loved it, thankyou for sharing this today, very much enjoyed. Rick |
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Jezzika Member
since 2005-01-05
Posts 154work |
"exposing that I am but a fool so helplessly in love with you" I really liked this part... This poem was awesome....  |
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lilibeelee Member
since 2001-07-12
Posts 143 |
really like this |
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RogueandPoet Member
since 2007-06-04
Posts 126Oregon |
That second verse really moved me.... nice. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
thank you all very very much!  |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
SEA...A tender reveal of your romantic heart. Great write. Enjoyed very much...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
wonderful write.. enjoyed! "and let me be coated in restraint when the sound of your voice rains upon my heart puddling my love at your feet…" That sets up the last bit perfectly! hugs, g |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
SEA Each time I read your poem, I love it more. It's beautiful and it speaks to me. A |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi there lady Sea...I love the feel of your sensuality. |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
wow !! and ! |
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