Open Poetry #40 |
Summering |
rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Peel away red for me, or let me bite into it so I may taste the bitter along with the sweet I've lived long enough, now to appreciate ripening Pretend I'm color blind, but don't imbue me with fast-food cartoon shades Such hues insult my gut need for slow habits: To eat with polished fingers, to sway from the effect of bubbles Please use yellow in small bursts Citrus is like that on trees for a reason Small coins and slivers from a distance Sparks that make lips squint up-close Purple is pretty, but it forces confessions I'm careful to notice it in the fields, believing it is forbidden to trample The vine or briar blackens my tongue with a darkness that spells out on occasion of sticky I've tasted plenty enough, now to understand Eve Ah, blue: Your eyes, have swallowed me whole. To willingly know your blue is to know miles of sky-gardens that do not produce as much as consume Green, green with me always, beyond soft grasses and checkered sands, picking blanket spots across now & there All colors, subtle compared to us I hope everyone finds a perfect blanket spot this summer. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
So lovely somy~ and green is my favorite color yanno? Nicely done Reg. Luv, me |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
regalone...this is just like the visor on my helmet after ridin thru the goodie fields..enjoyed it ms |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Wonderful visuals Regina RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Hi Regina, your colours brought me a rainbow and a treasure that I still enjoy, thank you for sharing this lovely poem, much enjoyed. Rick |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Somy~ Yes, just like our willow Thanks luv. D~ Aww, poor little love bugs. Oh well, at least they are happy when they go. Ride on Word daddy. Lovins. RDB~ I'm happy you had a look see. Thanks for smiling on me today. Huggins. Rick~ Actually, I wrote this on a hillside after I blocked traffic for just a few seconds. I stopped to take a picture of a rainbow. Full on in perfect light, cayman-blue sky, but the air seemed to possess a lemon haze due to the storm clouds filtering the sun. And all I had was my cell phone to capture it. I tried, with not so good results. ROYGBIV. Idigo and violet had to fit in with the purple passion shades and berry colors. How very perceptive of you Rick. Big hugs. love, reg |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"I've tasted plenty enough, now to understand Eve" ~ Keep on tasting, and seeing, feeling and sharing the colours of life. ~ and I now have a better understanding of both Eve AND you! Happy summering! Linda |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
damn! whew! |
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FNG Member
since 2006-02-07
Posts 477 |
"Green, green with me always, beyond soft grasses and checkered sands, picking blanket spots across now & there All colors, subtle compared to us" Love how you describe yourself...beautiful and pleasantly asthetic. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Now IF I had a visor it would be just like DS said. You were so missed lady. |
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RogueandPoet Member
since 2007-06-04
Posts 126Oregon |
This is an amzing poem and I am a big fan. I loved; To willingly know your blue is to know miles of sky-gardens that do not produce as much as consume. |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
i lovee everything you write more more more please i miss you |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Linda~ Hey there, and you bet I will. Thanks so much for leaving your thoughts with me. I appreciate you darlin'. Dixie~ yeah? Thanks with big smiles! FNG~Thank you for thinking so. Nice to meet you and looking forward to your art. Sharon~ Aww, its nice to be missed by you hon. You're a heart full. Big huggins. RogueandPoet~ Why thanks for your read and your kind words. I must catch more of yours. Inspirations to you dear poet. Helen~ I'm always happy to have you by, hon. I miss you and your deeplovelywild ocean breeze thoughts. I'll be around to write some and read more of all. It's good to be home. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Dear Regina..your rainbow of words is always so lovely, in any season. |
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