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icebox
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0 posted 2007-06-30 09:15 AM


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sunlight burning sky

dross from thoughts of dreamland's cast

ideas unfinished


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©2007 by icebox

[This message has been edited by icebox (07-01-2007 12:05 AM).]

© Copyright 2007 icebox - All Rights Reserved
Kahlil
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1 posted 2007-06-30 10:26 AM


I like that feeling, and the acceptance of right now.
I really love this haiku.
K

Drauntz
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2 posted 2007-06-30 12:50 PM


good. enjoyed
serenity blaze
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3 posted 2007-06-30 07:20 PM


sometimes I love when that happens--other times it just frustrates me.

and grin, you knew I'd be here.

"Serenity don't do haiku" but you do, and you are the best, methinks. (Okay, John is pretty good too, and Becky...)

and oh. *blush* I guess I can't do them because,

um, I'd have to finish an idea...


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5 posted 2007-06-30 09:58 PM


Well done, icebox. I assume you are regarding "ideas" as a two-syllable word...
icebox
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6 posted 2007-07-01 12:13 PM


Thank you all for tolerating this weakness of mine.

Yes, I am guilty of using a regional pronunciation of "ideas" as is seen in Mirriam-Webster:

Pronunciation: \î-ˈdç-ə, -ˈdçə also ˈî-(ˌ dç-ə or ˈî-dç\

Sorry.


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7 posted 2007-07-01 12:57 PM


LOL! I understand. Nan and I had a knock-down drag-out years ago on whether FIELD was one syllable (hers) or two (mine). Of course, growing up in Louisiana, I always thought YES was a two-syllable word
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8 posted 2007-07-01 02:18 AM


I enjoyed the simple beauty.

JaySea

You are your own greatest resource.... use all that can be revealed through YOU.   JaySea

Kahlil
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9 posted 2007-07-01 10:47 AM


I love it even more today...
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10 posted 2007-07-01 01:14 PM



I love the feeling

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11 posted 2007-07-01 08:52 PM


Hey you....
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