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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2007-06-28 10:36 AM


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A red sun
Rising from the sea
The air at dawn
Red and blue

A fox squirrel watching
From a red oak limb
Acorns falling from the tree

Cheeks just reddened
By the cold
A long red coat
Over brown leather shoes

Sugar maples
Over wooden eaves
Crimson leaves
On a gravel road


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adagio
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since 2005-03-19
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Marrero, La.
1 posted 2007-06-28 10:58 AM


wow what an image!

Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
Los Angeles California
2 posted 2007-06-28 11:11 AM


Cool autumn morning
Crosses eyes of the old squirrel
again and again




JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2007-06-28 04:45 PM


Enjoyed...James
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