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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2007-06-26 07:24 AM



    You do that...

when you weave your words
softly around souls
in shimmer songs
of soothing
scented slightly
with seductive suggestion
leaving sighs
in your wake...

    You do that...

when you twist mornings
of tender touch
into tumbles of laughter
by your tendance
through thought words
that tantalize eyes
to twinkling...

    You are that...

            Smile maker....

{thank you for the smiles my friend...}

revised 6-26-07


No more hangin' on to the past
No more filling up my tomorrows
With yesterday's sorrows
No more lookin' over my shoulder {T.Tritt}

© Copyright 2007 dmsmith - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2007-06-26 09:04 AM


very nice Donna
passing shadows
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2 posted 2007-06-26 07:59 PM


we all need smile makers in our lives



Gifted
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3 posted 2007-06-26 09:00 PM


Wow.  This was really nice.  I really liked it.  Even made me smile when reading it.  Excellent piece.
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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4 posted 2007-06-26 10:42 PM


Donna... this is perfect!  Beautifully expressed...   RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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5 posted 2007-06-27 09:03 AM


nice! I enjoyed this...
Angel4aKing
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6 posted 2007-06-27 11:49 AM


I remmeber a time in my life when this was ture for me as well...I just wonder why I never wrote about it HMMMMM.......Take care, JulieAnn

~~~kingsangel~~~

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7 posted 2007-06-27 04:24 PM


Having a friend that makes you smile,  or
a significant other......anywhooooo, you know
what I'm thinking...Having someone that does
is such a valuable gift...I have been blessed
with both sides of it... the giver and the
givee...givee?  hmmmmm

SmartChick
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8 posted 2007-06-27 10:03 PM


Having someone in your life, who makes you smile is indeed a wonderful gift.
Drauntz
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9 posted 2007-06-27 10:55 PM


beautiful again.

enjoyed


JamesMichael
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10 posted 2007-06-28 05:55 AM


Nice...James
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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11 posted 2007-06-28 06:12 AM


Just me again Donna, back for another read of this superb work of yours   Thanks for the smiles     RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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