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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2007-06-27 08:30 PM


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Soft ice cream
In crispy cones
Cool white wine
And tangy cheese

Geese and swans
Swim in pairs
Along the shore
Heat shimmering up
From a gravel road

Going home
Late afternoon
Cicadas in the trees

Dusk light
On the long backyard
A one car garage


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1 posted 2007-06-27 08:44 PM


"Soft ice cream
In crispy cones
Cool white wine
And tangy cheese"

ok now that just made my mouth water!!

Huan Yi
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2 posted 2007-06-27 08:51 PM


Sea,

I hope
with a memory . . .

Thank you

John


PS:  How does one describe the cones
those little glass and steel
Dixie shops, holding soft ice cream,
used to sell?


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3 posted 2007-06-27 09:02 PM


the wine and cheese, yes good memories...
the ice cream just sounds real good

and for the ps, I'm not sure...sorry.

Huan Yi
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4 posted 2007-06-27 09:12 PM


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Sea,

Probably before your time . . .


John

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5 posted 2007-06-27 09:59 PM


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6 posted 2007-06-28 06:18 AM


John...lovely visuals here ... RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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