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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Precious Times "Today is mine. The past belongs to God." The last night I held my sweetheart tight, my wish that I could remember it forever. She was a light that lit up my life, within the precious times we shared together. JamesLee 25June 2007 |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
you are always so sweet...and such a romantic  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very sweet |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
lovely James! RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Gifted Member
since 2007-06-26
Posts 140Caribbean |
The poem was nice, but I don't agree with the first stanza or two lines. "today is mine, the past belongs to God", that is very untrue. No hour, minute, or second of the day is yours. That line sounds like you're shoving God away, and just giving him the leftovers. That's just how it sounds to me. Just always remember no second of the day is yours. Peace. Love. Forgiveness. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Sea, passing, Roniece and Gifted for the nice responses. Gifted, God gives us the freedom to make choices...your choices are yours and my choices are mine...James |
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