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Giving up
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Giving up |
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lilibeelee Member
since 2001-07-12
Posts 143 |
Giving up on myself It's far too much to take Giving up now Clearing off the shelf I thought I might be able to hang on But I can't if nothing's there I thought I could get through this But aparently faith is gone Capable of so much Yet I'm restricted I can stop these thoughts, im just addicted No support in sight Makes for disaster Just make this go on Hopefully that comes faster Devastation surrounds And there's not much more I can do I'm cold, I'm Tired, I'm done My hands bear so much burden Someone take away this pain Lost grips completly I'm going insane I wonder how good it would feel Or if im talking crazy I can't see staight anymore It's all become hazy What have I done? What have I done? I'm so lost I suffer yet again Please wake me up And say it's all pretend I've lost who I am I've lost my dreams I've lost my hopes I'm coming apart at the seams Trying to seek comfort Instead I feel cold Trying to justify It's getting very old I guess this is goodbye |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I'm sorry if you are hurting...this just screams with sadness and heartache.  be well |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Consider your choices...take action...if you see no choices watch for them...if you have no choices wait for them...you always have choices...James |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
there is always support in writing poetry thanks for sharing and I'm sorry you are feeling this way but time heals all wounds...really it does trust me...I've been wounded quite a lot and I'm still here and basically happy |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
There is hope, you have a purpose and a future. Turn to the one who loves you and can help you~Jeremiah 29:11 J. M. Barrie, the playwright, may have said it best when he wrote, “God gave us memories so that we might have roses in December.” |
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Gifted Member
since 2007-06-26
Posts 140Caribbean |
Nice poem, but it was strange the way some parts rhymed and others didn't. Also, I always remember... everybody has a purpose in life, God made it that way on purpose. Peace. Love. Forgiveness. |
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