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A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2007-06-26 03:14 AM

Oh, soul of my soul,
life of my life,
death of my death,
hear my cry,

Oh, heart of my heart,
breath of my breath,
the sting in my eye,

Oh, love of my love,
mind of my mind,
depart not from me,

Oh, dream of my dream,
song of my song,
I will never be free.

A Chained heart-
locked with your love
can only be opened,
with your key.

J. M. Barrie, the playwright, may have said it best when he wrote, “God gave us memories so that we might have roses in December.”

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2007-06-26 06:47 AM

I am not trying to be smart, only thinking of a time when I thought these thoughts, and she lost the key...James

Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

2 posted 2007-06-26 11:50 AM

beautiful and romantic again.

truly a beautiful piece.

enjoyed as always

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2007-06-26 07:55 PM

beautifully expressed

Gifted
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since 2007-06-26

Posts 140
Caribbean

4 posted 2007-06-26 08:55 PM

Nice poem, but I have a disagreement with the end. I don't think that only "you" can open the lock, but also your true love. Don't you think?

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

5 posted 2007-06-26 11:25 PM

Gifted thanks for your response:

The "YOU" is my true love....

~ARH

J. M. Barrie, the playwright, may have said it best when he wrote, “God gave us memories so that we might have roses in December.”

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

6 posted 2007-06-26 11:26 PM

Thanks to all who replied!
James, Dixie, and Drauntz.

J. M. Barrie, the playwright, may have said it best when he wrote, “God gave us memories so that we might have roses in December.”

JL
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since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

7 posted 2007-06-29 10:34 AM

Very nice.

JL

What I used to do with one hand tied behind my back now requires every muscle in my body, cohesively.
~JL

Gifted
Member

since 2007-06-26

Posts 140
Caribbean

8 posted 2007-06-30 11:18 PM

I'm glad that I am your true love ARH. I'm rather flattered.

Peace. Love. Forgiveness.
Blessings and Guidance

Patricia
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since 2003-04-06

Posts 2160
Missouri

9 posted 2007-07-02 06:20 PM

I really loved this...soft and beautiful.

Patricia

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