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Dreams of Lost Love! |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! 
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Dreams of Lost Love In a merciless cosmos on this wilderness night, through the star-taper forest shines a mystical light… the crisp-moon is drifting past all purpose of men, through the canyons and vistas carved by rain and the wind… to an inscrutable ocean beyond all reason and rhyme, where dreams of ‘lost love’ are transcending time! ~ |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
ahha well I'm sure you can guess that I think this is a beauty! Cause it is!!  Very nice Bruce |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
A beautiful poem, indeed. |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
a beauty again. truly wonderful write enjoyed |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Wonderful words here Bruce  RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
The first stanza sets the scene and the tone of the poem, perfectly: "In a merciless cosmos on this wilderness night, through the star-taper forest shines a mystical light…" A part of the love that we have known in the past, remains with us always.  Sweet Dreams, Dear Dreamer Poet! Linda  |
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Robert Jordan Member
since 2007-02-07
Posts 392Philadelphia Pa USA |
Secondhanddreampoet, This works well, with an odd rhyme scheme I don't know about. Bobby |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
to an inscrutable ocean beyond all reason and rhyme, where dreams of ‘lost love’ are transcending time! Oh my  |
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ArtSolstice Member
since 2007-03-18
Posts 498 |
Elegant ... Haunting... |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Thanks to all who commented on this particular 'write'! [As a (rather obvious?!) 'incurable Romantic', this one was kinda 'special' to me!] ~ |
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RogueandPoet Member
since 2007-06-04
Posts 126Oregon |
I think this is one of yours that will be one of my favorites. |
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Fairplay Member
since 2007-01-15
Posts 222England |
Night- light Men- Wind Rhyme- Time I think you matched Men and Wind brilliantly We are so full of wind when it comes to romantic recollections Still must bash on for the umpteenth time looking for my place in that ocean of love |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"to an inscrutable ocean beyond all reason and rhyme, where dreams of ‘lost love’ are transcending time!" need to dip my toes in your ocean poet this is so lovely |
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paullallady Member
since 2007-04-03
Posts 262Michigan |
"where dreams of ‘lost love’ are transcending time" beautiful!!! |
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