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Open Poetry #40

walls

kyler
New Member

since 2007-06-21

Posts 9

0 posted 2007-06-21 02:50 PM

Walls
I've built them up all around me
I don't want people to come in
I might let them peek in but never will they enter
But slowly the foundation is breaking
And slowly the walls are crumbling
The world as I knew it is coming to an end
And I am ready

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

1 posted 2007-06-21 03:12 PM

beautiful and philosophical.

beautiful again.

enjoyed

oceanvu2
Senior Member

since 2007-02-24

Posts 1066
Santa Monica, California, USA

2 posted 2007-06-21 03:18 PM

Here's to your beautiful new world!

Best, Jim

Nightingale
Junior Member

since 2007-06-21

Posts 31
Depths of The Unkown, UK

3 posted 2007-06-21 05:35 PM

A fortress around the heart
understanding this one.

MarkG
Junior Member

since 2007-06-21

Posts 48
California USA

4 posted 2007-06-21 06:27 PM

everyone can understand what your saying and relate...your words are great and the walls probally best come down...keep writing its great to read your work

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2007-06-21 08:37 PM

I have walls too and I feel them coming down at times, no matter how I fight to keep them up

love this one!

Robert Jordan
Member

since 2007-02-07

Posts 392
Philadelphia Pa USA

6 posted 2007-06-21 11:13 PM

Kyler,

Well, probably not.

Bobby

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