Open Poetry #40 |
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Summer |
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Martie
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Posts 28049California ![]() |
Air moves slowly through the open door then begs the corner of my eye to watch as a small thread from a spider's web turns into a gold chain even as I look away feeling like I can't bear to know how fragile this one thing is and how carelessly it can be destroyed but I have already seen it connecting the wooden door frame to the bookcase where in one corner a book is wrapped up in patient silk sewn up so tight lace fingers of it hold its pages in place I see a fluff of feather there caught fast by the delicate strings cast across the air and taken by the sun like a piece of art holding mighty a drift from a molting summer bird I watch a hammock swing macraméd and filled gracefully with wind then set on fire with sunlight and I am captured in the whim that it is marking a path to the place of bare feet and the sound of summer's children in the yard gone too soon and replaced with slamming car doors and crows quarreling in the shadows of morning How slowly air moves into the voices of the trees Over my shoulder I sense time moving made from the slipping of summer even as I turn wanting to catch the first squeal from a cool-down sprinkler's child and only find the sound of leaves [This message has been edited by Martie (06-21-2007 09:53 PM).] |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
truly beautiful. and a cool summer scene. enjoyed. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very touching piece Martie yes, this touches me deeply |
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Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Ohhhhh Martie .. I have missed reading you! ![]() This whole piece is so delicately woven with visuals sprinkled so vividly throughout ... it just takes my breath away. Beautiful, truly. ![]() Best wishes and big hugs, /Kit |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The leaves that one turns over time and tales, says much, if not only to us, than to anyone who studies ear-marks of our libraries after our passing. Summer is a wonderful time to read, as is any other term... but that we do, says even more. ![]() |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
very touching write Martie, and I love you use of imagery. You have such a way with words m'friend. I so enjoy reading you. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
How slowly air moves into the voices of the trees Over my shoulder I sense time moving made from the slipping of summer even as I turn wanting to catch the first squeal from a cool-down sprinkler's child and only find the sound of leaves Martie, Martie, oh how I love reading your fabric of lexicons which tingles so so many imagines to come alive...sound, sight, taste and touch, become brilliant words that stimulate...and you make life come alive...filled with events, footnoting everything, every mood, every feeling, both good and bad, which we understand is out of our control.... good to read you lady, very good to read you! ![]() |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You watch and listen ~ now I can see and hear. Your powers of observation are outstanding and you convey them into poetry of the finest that there be. May this new season be a joyful one! Love & Summer Light, Linda ![]() |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Spider webs are gorgeous in a breeze of golden sun. Oh how I relate to your words. Thanks. Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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paullallady Member
since 2007-04-03
Posts 262Michigan |
What amazing, beautiful imagery you have painted with your words. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
So delicate the fine threads that hold our lives to the earth. I thought this one beautiful read MartieWord. Oh, still moving with the soft warm air of this. ![]() |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
really, really enjoyed this my friend, but absolutely loved the open lines... jwesley |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
Martie - you paint images in my mind that make me breathless. You are the best! |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Martie, I came back twice to read this and had to finally respond. Lovely words written by a beautiful lady. thank you. martyjo |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Martie, this is absolutely gorgeous, spun golden words of pure poetry! Once again, you've allowed your reader to see the delicate threads of life through your keen eyesight, and you've revealed far more than you perhaps know, in those moments of suspended animation. The essence of life itself is caught within your finely woven handfuls of silken words. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
absolutely wonderful...this 'write' is definitively 'as good as it gets'! long sustained poetic 'standing ovation'!! |
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Ratleader![]()
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
That haunting sense that something is missing, and you can't come to a clear notion of what it might be....there's a song in that, and I'd like to sing it, as well as you have. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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