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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2007-06-21 07:28 AM



The Ultimate Test of Love


Who can stop love
from advancing
to the place
it wants
to go.

Who can hold onto
love when its
ready to
move on.

Love
will
test
you.


JamesLee
21June
2007







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Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
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1 posted 2007-06-21 07:46 AM


It does all of this and more James...nicley put, well written.  
Robert Jordan
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since 2007-02-07
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2 posted 2007-06-21 11:32 AM


James,

This makes sense, that's good.

Nice shape too.

Bobby

JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
3 posted 2007-06-21 11:54 AM


LOVE??
Who can explain that?
It's like asking:
"What does bread taste like?"
It just is.

Nice write JamesLee...

JL

What I used to do with one hand tied behind my back now requires every muscle in my body, cohesively.
~JL

Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
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Los Angeles California
4 posted 2007-06-21 12:47 PM


truth and romantic..beautiful as always.
Moonkist
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since 2006-09-29
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5 posted 2007-06-21 05:29 PM


Simply beautiful... loved it!
~Moonkist

Freedom Now

passing shadows
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6 posted 2007-06-21 08:42 PM


honest thoughts

so true

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