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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Been thinking how long truth takes to make the change to a restored heart. How smothered thoughts play the notes of a challenging tune with too much pause. Sometimes chasing time takes me backwards and I begin to have static cling Contrasting moments that quiver the night's hold, while stuck in the middle with a masquerade smile. Today I am selfless, cradling the voice of tomorrow, growing older... while living young. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
M! That last stanza is just PERFECT. And? Lady are we ever having thoughts alike today. How long truth takes, indeed...sigh... Oh~  you.....No more hangin' on to the past No more filling up my tomorrows With yesterday's sorrows No more lookin' over my shoulder {T.Tritt} |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Good Morning, Donna. School is finally out for me... now I have to figure out what to do with my time after I take a short visit to Tenn. to pick up my Mom and bring her back for a week. Been so used to getting up at 5 a.m. and not getting home until 5:30 p.m. I hope you have a great summer!  M |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Honestly, Naked One, every single line is an absolute gem! Lovin' hug, Linda |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Beautiful Maureen! I don't think my heart will ever be restored. No matter how long truth takes. |
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bslicker 
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
M have a good trip enjoyed the write it's vacation time relax..LOL bernie  A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Smiling at you...nodding at this. |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
beautiful and beautiful again. enjoyed |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi Maureen "growing older while living young" When the air is warm, like now, and the sky seems limitless, I feel the same. Lovely poem! |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
very fine, powerful, emotive, effective 'write'! [wonderful 'read'!] I especially LOVE: "...stuck in the middle with a masquerade smile." [kinda 'sums up' my (alleged) life!] AND: "...cradling the voice of tomorrow..." sustained applause!! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I get static cling too *smiling* |
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