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Moonkist Member
since 2006-09-29
Posts 197Pennsylvania |
Our Lives Radically Different Or so we thought We found It became Quite Complimentary Our hearts open Truths emerge Our friendships deepen Exchanges occur Souls find a rare meeting place to visit Again and Again We meet in that place When we least expect it And need it the most Freedom Now |
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Topheth Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 297Texas |
This one touches me so.... Great write, nice read. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
fine 'write'! I especially loved: "Souls find a rare meeting place to visit... When we least expect it And need it the most..." Applause!! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
excellent! |
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Moonkist Member
since 2006-09-29
Posts 197Pennsylvania |
Thank you all for your sweet replies.... This place definitely feels as one of those "meeting places"  Much love, Moonkist Freedom Now |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Revisit...James |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
What a precious piece of poetic penning! I felt it in my heart and soul ~ which you appear to have in abundance.  Loving hug, EA P.S. I was wondering if you meant "complementary" instead of "complimentary" in this instance. |
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Robert Jordan Member
since 2007-02-07
Posts 392Philadelphia Pa USA |
Moonkist, The strange capitalization in this is rather off-putting. I'd also suggest some appropriate punctuation. Bobby |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
I love it when harmony happens...and it's never an accident. It's always a treasure to know a friend, though, because they will often know you better in those first moments that otherS might in a hundred years. ~ K |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
an excellent write Moonkist |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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