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MUM's the Word on Fathers Day
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MUM's the Word on Fathers Day |
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Fairplay Member
since 2007-01-15
Posts 222England |
Hey DAD I didn’t forget you See I remembered I forgot But that’s about it all for now My own kidsI have got It’s the way you dragged me up I didn’t need to think Until the day you kicked me out Told me “Swim or Sink” My kids will do the same to me You know it isn’t fun They never do a single thing Unless they’re told by MUM |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Sounds like some strong emotions, both in front and behind the lines here. Loved your ending line too. Much enjoyed.  Best wishes, /Kit |
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