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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! 
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‘Poet-dreams’ When night begins its grim journey heavy with the silence of the wind across the bridges of eternity, and through the hills and declivities of Time, as an inscrutable moon drifts above the ruined mountains by starlight, Nature’s serenity wraps the weary mind, (like the snow-webbed sleep of southern pines) in velvet darkness that proves the soul’s elixir, lacing quintessential ‘poet-dreams’ with an incandescent faith in transcendental love! [This message has been edited by secondhanddreampoet (06-17-2007 06:30 PM).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OhBruce~ You give me night *sighs* to dream upon~ 'lacing quintessential ‘poet-dreams’ with incandescent faith in transcendental love!' BIG NIGHT *SIGHS*  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Bruce You paint so much beauty in your poems. I feel like I see what you see and I guess I do. Thank you for bringing such imagry to my world You teach me a lot about what I hope to achieve. Alison |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
~sigh~ Another stunning romantic beauty from your unique quill, to rival the passionate pennings of past poet-dreamers. |
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paullallady Member
since 2007-04-03
Posts 262Michigan |
"Nature’s serenity wraps the weary mind," what a beautiful, peaceful, and tender poem this is. |
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ArtSolstice Member
since 2007-03-18
Posts 498 |
Oh, Bruce, this is so beautiful! Especially: Nature’s serenity wraps the weary mind, (like the snow-webbed sleep of southern pines) in velvet darkness that proves the soul’s elixir, lacing quintessential ‘poet-dreams’ with incandescent faith in transcendental love! Question: Are those last 3 lines optimism? *smile* |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
This is entrancing with the words and images woven so tightly it makes the poem sing. a good commitee can decimate communication. |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
beautiful again another perfect piece. enjoyed |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Bruce, This is indeed an excellent write and as for the last three lines, well, I think it is a truth that many can associate with. For others it may just be an optimistic viewpoint but either way they're great lines. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Smiling at this...the only line I don't agree with is "night's grim journey"...how can it be grim, when it leads to so much?  Thank you for this one! |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
yes love those dreams! ~ARH |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Just beautiful! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
your poetry is beyond thought or reason poet mystic... |
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