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oceanvu2 Senior Member
since 2007-02-24
Posts 1066Santa Monica, California, USA |
Take comfort where you find it. Steel yourself, and don’t let any man steal comfort from you. Ear plugs can be useful tools to drown Out drones and dolts. You can’t out shout them Anyway. At days end, find the strength to say “I am the way I am because I am this way.” |
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Topheth Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 297Texas |
All I can say is... what I just said.  |
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oceanvu2 Senior Member
since 2007-02-24
Posts 1066Santa Monica, California, USA |
topeth -- perfectly reasoned response  Thanks, Jim |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I work nights so I sleep in the day...I have found earplugs to be quite useful to me |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I like the way you put the 'Anyway' on the next line to lead it off. That makes it stronger, and emphasizes it. I like the whole poem, the way it stands there and is itself. Nicely done. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 thank you for this |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Great message. but you could out-sing them? or turn up the volume Gavin DeGraw |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Excellent thoughts put to words Ruth |
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oceanvu2 Senior Member
since 2007-02-24
Posts 1066Santa Monica, California, USA |
Thank you very much, PiP friends! Best, Jim |
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