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We Are Love
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We Are Love |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA 
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We Are Love  I've searched everywhere for a gift to bring you, yet, nothing seemed right. How does one bring gold to a gold mine? beauty to beauty itself? or a jug of water to the ocean?  Everything that has touched my imagination is like bringing a miracle to perfection and when you have reached heaven it is fruitless to buy a ladder. For, it is no extraordinary feat giving you my heart and soul because you already own these. So, I’ve brought you a mirror look at yourself and remember me. By Melissa Long-Monette Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world! |
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shirtless Member
since 2006-04-29
Posts 359 |
hi, good to read your work again. this poem thoroughly establishes a quandary, and concludes with a satisfying resolution. nicely done |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
truly a beautiful piece. and truth in life enjoyed |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"For, it is no extraordinary feat giving you my heart and soul because you already own these" I soooo loved these lines!!  very much enjoyed this |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Most lovely. Alison |
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